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VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.

Started by Leezee · 6 Nov 2007 · 76 posts survive · see it on the Wayback Machine

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LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 6 Nov 2007, 8:25pmSubject: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Alright, entries are in, here is your chance to vote!

Please pick your top 3 entries and post in here, giving the best one 3 points, second 2 points, and third 1 point. It is strongly encouraged that you give constructive feedback on all the entries if you can.


Please award points rather than ranking the tunes - that just gets confusing. icon_confused

Give top marks to those tunes that you think are well produced, not just your favourite genre. Don't just vote for your mates!


Enjoy! Some serious quality here:


Track 1

Track 2

Track 3

Track 4

Track 5

Track 6

Track 7

Track 8 - Late listing due to mistake on Oli's part. sorry!

Also don't forget that the entries will also be judged privately by The Elektro Kitten, who kindly donated the vocals used in this competition.


Voting closes at midnight next Tuesday people! Get on it!



P.S. A huge thanks to Oli for helping get these entries posted, and to all the producers who managed to make the effort.  clap Well done chaps.
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the elektro kittenThe Elektro Kitten
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Posted: 6 Nov 2007, 9:16pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
VERY VERY VERY impressed with the entries... there are 3 that really stand out to me, but all of em were great!!! GOing to be tough to pick a winner!
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GlockPromoters
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Posted: 6 Nov 2007, 9:18pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Just a heads up, track 5 still has the id3 tags on it. Shouldn't they be removed?
LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 6 Nov 2007, 9:32pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Just a heads up, track 5 still has the id3 tags on it. Shouldn't they be removed?

Done! Cheers for the heads up, thought I checked all those!
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StrykeSuper Hyper-Mega
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Posted: 6 Nov 2007, 9:44pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
 haha not many dnb entries!

 One of them is head and shoulders standing out for me.

Mo$tDefPosts: 404
Posted: 6 Nov 2007, 9:57pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
here is my verdict in the little time i gave it. i must say i dont know too much about 'making' music.

1. (no8) nice bass, nice use of the vocal, intricate little keys
2. (no5) i like it, and i dont usually like a lot of house, just seems right
3. (no6) dont like the intro that much, but like the messing with the vocal, sounds good
4. (no1) i like the drums, bass lags a little, but quality none the less
5. (no4) very chilled, downtempo, woulda liked it to drop a bit deeper at one point though, nice
6. (no7) very shawshank intro, keys need more fucking with or could be faster but not bad
7. (no2) dont like it, not into this shit tho
8. (no3) where is the intro? too distorted, vocal doesnt work, nice try though, keep at it


EDIT: really should have spent more time listening to these
LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 6 Nov 2007, 10:02pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Number 5 being removed for a short while due to what's uploaded not being the quality of what was submitted. Possible upload fuckup.

CHECK BACK LATER!
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GlockPromoters
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Posted: 6 Nov 2007, 10:50pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
3 Pts - Track 8
Very very clean and polished sound to this one. Excellent structure, the intro was well crafted and as with my choice for second, made a good use of the vocal elements throughout the tune. Great use of what I like to call 'filler' sounds, those little drums that fill out the breaks. The main hook synth was really catchy also and nicely broke up the song. Great build-ups to the drop and interesting drum patterns.

2 Pts - Track 7
Definitely the most creative use of the vocal in this one, chopped it up and teased it in nicely. Especially liked the interesting drum sequence and structure-wise this came across quite fresh. Good use of additional samples and the intro and each build-up was excellent.

1 Pt - Track 2
Funnily enough, despite me not really liking this style of music much, I thought this was one of the best sounding tunes of the lot. All of it's elements gelled together well, and it sounded chunky. The vocals fit in nicely and the track felt really polished. Lost points for me though for not using the vocal enough throughout the tune.


Honourable Mentions (I wish I could give a point to these ones as well!)

Track 1
Really enjoyed this, nice rolling bassline and enough subtle elements throughout to keep interest. Beautiful lush synths in here. This was a top effort.

Track 4
This was great but I would have really liked a few nice thick bass notes winding their way through this. Not like a constant thing but added in sparingly to give it some spice. Just a little bit more meat on it's bones needed! Other than that I really really felt this track.

Track 6
I thought the tune itself was really phat. That bassline that twisted in at the start was really sick, nice filtering. This track had a lot of energy, probably more so than any other entered. The manipulation on the vocals was also a nice touch. Unfortunately, sometimes the vocals sounded like they didn't quite fit with the tune/beat though.


Remaining Tunes Summary

Track 3
I felt that the style of this tune really didn't fit the supplied vocals, in both their sound and lyrical content. It was fairly busy as well which hurt my opinion of it. Some overuse of samples (horror styles!) as well. Still a great effort in an angry techy kind of way, but not with those vocals...

Track 5
Well structured trance style track, but something went wrong on the mixdown or something because that underlying bass was muddy and distorted. Edit: Keen to hear it once the fixed version is put up by Leezee.


oliJust the
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Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 9:30amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Please note we have a late entry due to a mistake on my part. Apologies to the entrant for Track 8. This track is now listed in Leezee's original post and available to download now so those of you who have replied allready and not listened to this track please check it out!

Sorry again to this entrant!
TurbulenceIron helps us Play
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Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 3:25pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
... or is it?   icon_wink

GlockPromoters
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Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 4:53pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Damn these competition runners and their errors!  teef

I really liked that new tune...I'll have to edit my earlier voting post to reflect that now...  cussing
roostR/evolution massive
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Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 5:59pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
not voting coz ive got a tune in, ill write some comments tho and post them later
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RgonConquering the world, one Byte @ a time
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Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 6:01pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
not voting coz ive got a tune in, ill write some comments tho and post them later

Yep same.....

Voting for myself prolly not a smart plan.......  angel
NoddyPosts: 3,990
Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 6:42pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Hands down track 8 is the best of the bunch here. Thank god, because after forcing myself to listen to the rest I needed this to restore some faith. Miles ahead of anything else submitted.

Track 2 was also pretty damn good - decent production and all that. I just dont like the style.

I'm still yet to hear Track 5.
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makaPosts: 662
Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 7:31pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
yeah thought 8 was a standout but i thought 1 had some potentiel well done to all that had a crack..
Surreal~Sal~
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Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 7:57pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Do we have to vote in here??
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bezzPosts: 380
Posted: 7 Nov 2007, 8:12pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
8 gets the top vote by me, love the bassline... also the doorsish synth bit at the end is a nice touch
7 is next, nice minimalist approach... guess its the in thing at the moment
3rd for me will be track 6, like what you did with the vocals

honourable mentions: track 2, wicked tunage just didnt think the vocals fit
track 4, lovin teh dub but wheres the subbass?!
LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 8 Nov 2007, 1:30amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Track 5 is up! Track 5

Thanks to those who have posted so far, feel free to modify your votes if you got in before the last couple of tracks were up.

Do we have to vote in here??

You don't have to...

Not sure voting elsewhere would do ya much good tho.  teef


i.e. yes this is the place to submit your votes.
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warped fairyPosts: 2,134
Posted: 8 Nov 2007, 10:21amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
here's my vote:

1 - 8
2 - 7
3 - 5

and then 4 & 2

well done everyone!!   clap
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cleascJ.R.F.M.O
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Posted: 8 Nov 2007, 10:44amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
here's my vote:

1 - 8
2 - 7
3 - 5

and then 4 & 2

well done everyone!!   clap

1 point for track 8 or 1st pick (ie 3 points) for track 8???

Are the tracks available in a zip file for download???
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warped fairyPosts: 2,134
Posted: 8 Nov 2007, 11:12amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
first pick!!!
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LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 8 Nov 2007, 4:16pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
 laugh I told you it would get confusing!
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GlockPromoters
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Posted: 8 Nov 2007, 4:56pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Hey I voted as per the rules stated, ie. award a points system.

Everyone else seems to be doing the rank thing though, obviously they can't read... nahnah  teef
warped fairyPosts: 2,134
Posted: 9 Nov 2007, 8:04amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Everyone else seems to be doing the rank thing though, obviously they can't read... nahnah  teef

i can read!  i just didn't read it!! 

just to make it easier - 3pts for track 8, 2pts for track 7, and 1pt for track 5.

happy?   moon
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cleascJ.R.F.M.O
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Posted: 9 Nov 2007, 12:31pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Weak!

Just download them  flip

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Can only download zips at work for some stupid reason, and still no net at home!!!

I wanna hear peeps stuff icon_cry
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deathmazePosts: 363
Posted: 9 Nov 2007, 2:43pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Sorry cleasc... I retract my   flip


I hope you get to hear them soon hug
RgonConquering the world, one Byte @ a time
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Posted: 9 Nov 2007, 5:02pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Only 4 public votes so far.

C'mon guys what's going on?   icon_eek

dubbdrockin it
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Posted: 11 Nov 2007, 12:01pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
just downloaded them all, will have a listen soon
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nathoPosts: 222
Posted: 11 Nov 2007, 3:19pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
I'll download and give them a listen from a net cafe tomorrow. Dial up doesn't agree with downloading.
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LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 11 Nov 2007, 6:05pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
not voting coz ive got a tune in, ill write some comments tho and post them later

I would actually encourage producers to vote, just don't vote for your own. You can either save your comments for after, or disguise which track is yours by giving yourself some constructive criticism as well. My vote will be up soon.
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DJRedbackPosts: 4
Posted: 11 Nov 2007, 9:48pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Fair enough Leezee, I'm putting up my votes and I also declare that any other producers not voting coz they dont want to give points to tunes other than their own are nambypambypoopantssookylala crybabies.

1st (3 pts) to track 1
2nd (2 pts) to track 8
3rd (1 pt) to track 4

I'll post comments on each track after voting has closed.
RgonConquering the world, one Byte @ a time
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Posted: 12 Nov 2007, 8:22amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Fair enough Leezee, I'm putting up my votes and I also declare that any other producers not voting coz they dont want to give points to tunes other than their own are nambypambypoopantssookylala crybabies.

Well no-one wants to be a nambypambypoopantssookylala crybaby now do we ........

rofl

I was actually thinking that it was more to keep the public vote fair'n'all but meh, here's da votes.

3 Points - Track 1

2 Points - Track 8

1 Point - Track 5

Well done to everyone that entered.
dubbdrockin it
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Posted: 12 Nov 2007, 9:42pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
track 1 - production is great and the whole piece is well written
track 2 - pretty well produced although the vocals don't seem to fit that well with the rest of the track
track 3 - levels!!!! the ideas were there just the structure and mixing needs work
track 4 - don't mind this although some work needs to be done to make it flow and change up abit. maybe if you were trying to emulate another style you could compare your track to others in that genre and try and work out what is needed. the drums lacked something not in the programming though just in the overall sound.
track 5 - not a genre i really get into but the production is pretty good, the vocals sit really well in mix. bass synth is abit muddy imo.
track 6 - sounds good but the vocals are out to me! bass could be layered to give it some extra depth
track 7 - got abit repetitive but the production side of things was pretty good
track 8 - yes yes, musically interesting and well produced. love the way the vocals were used.


3 points - track 8
2 ponts - track 1
1 point - track 2

well done people, did better than me and actually finished your track!
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TurbulenceIron helps us Play
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Posted: 14 Nov 2007, 10:54amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Haven't had internetz for few days so sorry for the late vote

3 points - Track 8
2 points - Track 1
1 point - Track 6


I will also post comments on each track after voting has closed.
nathoPosts: 222
Posted: 14 Nov 2007, 3:42pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
When is it closing?
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roostPromoters
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Posted: 14 Nov 2007, 6:26pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Alright ill vote then..

3 points track 8
2 Track 2 (i think) the NRG one, Im away working & cant listen
1 track 1

comments later
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nathoPosts: 222
Posted: 17 Nov 2007, 4:38amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Track 1: I really like the intro on this one, slowly gets into it, a bit uplifting. I really like this track, very chilled out. I love the chosen background chords, they work really well. The Vocals sit well in the mix. Overall a dope track. Very well produced, everything sits nicely.

Track 2: Not a big listener of this genre, but overall the production is good, although the vocals could be down a bit, and possibly compressed better to fit into the mix. I also think the paddy sound in the background could have less attack. It also gets a bit busy for my liking as well, but as far as I know that could just have something to do with the genre. Overall a pretty good track. On a final note it would be better to have a few extra seconds at the end of the mix, as it cuts out before the delay is finished.

Track 3: This track has great potential. But levels!!!!!!. An intro to me would have been nice. Also don't jump in with everything straight away. Introduce ideas and save some for later. At the very end theres also some quite painful bass which should have been cut a tad.

Track 4: I like the intro, some good ideas being brought in. Vocals maybe a bit quieter. Or possibly some reverb would cool. Not heaps just a tad.  A great track but it just doesn't really go anywhere.

Track 5: Not a huge fan of this style, but I really like the production and the way the vocals sit. To me the kick sounds a bit 'clicky' with not enough low end. The arrangement sounds good as well to me, although as said I don't really know that much about the genre.

Track 6: The vocals seem a tad out, and can also be a bit loud and overpowering in places. The bass really needs to be more powerful, as that is what is driving the song. Yes listening now the vocals are definitely out. The bass could possibly be a bit tighter as well, with more attack and either a gate or the notes being a tad shorter in places. Production was o.k. but nothing fantastic.

Track 7: My first thought is that the the drums could have been brought in slower with a high pass filter. Maybe a bit of filtering with the drums for a bit of variance at the start. I like what you've done with the vocals though. Not a huge fan of the bass, both the sound and the composition, it just sounds a bit cheesy to me. One word there. Layering, this is what makes a track. It is a bit repetitive as well. Overall I'm not a huge fan of any of the synth sounds your using there, to me they just sound like FL studio 3x OSC presets. The vocals weren't used that much either, which considering the aim of this song could have been a bit better. Overall reasonable production.

Track 8: I like when the drums come in, but not particularly any of the synthy sounds. I like the bass sound, and also what you've done with the vocals. That Rhodes piano riff was pretty cool though. Overall a pretty good track production and composition wise, although I wasn't particularly taken by it.

Ok now for the points:

3 Points: Track 1
2 Points: Track 8
1 Point: Track 3 (This was a hard choice, but although the production wasn't too flash the composition was pretty good.)
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FlukePosts: 672
Posted: 19 Nov 2007, 11:56amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
3 Points - Track One

It all comes together nicely, and is one of only few tracks that has a vibe to it. Nice use of layers. 'Simple' yet very effective, no need to get too busy or incorporate too many ideas into the track to make it work.

2 Points - Track Six

Good skills on this track, I wanted to vote it first but it needs a better mix down on it, what with your compression on the bass being too dull/behind, needs more kick/oomph to it. Other people are saying that the vocals are out, but i get the feeling that this is intentional, because i can see that you have the know how to remedy this. Also there is good overall progression in the ideas of the track, and uses different techniques as it moves through. Well done!

1 Point - Track Seven

Great production on this one, everything is tight. I love all the complimentary additions to the break throughout this track (background noises per se), and the intro and refrain breakdowns are madness. Good work.


Honourable Mention - Track Eight

I had to get this one in there somewhere. Sounds very generic to me (like its a sample track on Reason), but on the whole there is okay progression, goos use of layers, even though it does get quite busy at times and lots of ideas are thrown around it still seems to work out okay in the end. Still seems a bit too schoolbook to me. There are a few deadzones in the track too that sound out of place, where ALL the levels are cut out like someone pressed stop, instead of having some echo/noise fading in the background. Seems very odd.

Also - Track Three

Great ideas, levels need attention badly. Was this just thrown together as a production idea cos it seems like it. Awesome draft piece to work with but its very scrappy as a track.
RgonConquering the world, one Byte @ a time
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Posted: 19 Nov 2007, 3:14pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
When is the Kitten going to announce the winner?

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cleascJ.R.F.M.O
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Posted: 19 Nov 2007, 5:23pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Hopefully not yet... gimme another few days. Supposedly getting the net @ home tomorrow  crossfingers
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the elektro kittenThe Elektro Kitten
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Posted: 19 Nov 2007, 5:34pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
I will be in the next few days i promise icon_wink
just finished uni today! So i'll set down to look at all the commentary plus give feedback on all tracks entered. Then i'll announce who won it for me Smiley music
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RgonConquering the world, one Byte @ a time
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Posted: 19 Nov 2007, 7:22pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Niiice.....    rofl

Stamina MCPosts: 11
Posted: 22 Nov 2007, 11:52amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Fuggit, here are mine, then...

Track 1

Nice structure to this one; the most natural-sounding in terms of progression and one of the more faithful to the original (not easy considering how little there was to play with). Volume is a little low overall; drums are nice sounding if a tad 'splashy' in the top end, and the bassline is pleasant - thick and warm, but a little unadventurous melodically. Vocal is effected nicely but levels are a bit wayward in places. Good use of synth layers. Decent.

Track 2

I know precious little about this sort of music - what genre it even is escapes me. But fuck it, I like it. Would never go out and dance to it, but it's got a good vibe to it, it's energetic. Progresses quite nicely over time, and mix sounds healthy on it too. Only thing, and perhaps a critical thing, is the use of vocal really seems quite slapdash. It's not in key and the timing is kinda off also; it's as if it were just laid over a random track as an after-thought.

Track 3

Whoa! This is some splatterhouse shizzle here. Tough beats and gritty bass, a real lip-curler. Gets my head nodding for sure. It's lacking quite a bit of top end, though - and once again the vocal isn't in key, although 'sits' right in the mix. Coulda done with more in the rhythm section - hats, percussion etc to add a sense of development throughout the tune. It's also a bit short - well, by D&B standards anyway - is this meant to be a PA mix, or radio edit or something? :-p

Track 4

This is slick. Love the mood set by the weather FX, and I'm a sucker for an arpeg in a toon, so this one had me at "hello". Lazy as fuck and stylish with it. Very synthetic sounding beats, but it makes sense contextually with the vibe of this piece. Didn't suffer for lack of an obvious bassline, nor for any real melodic changes over time. It just 'worked'. Nice.

Track 5

Hmmm. From a compositional standpoint I can't really fault this tune, but I really REALLY don't like tracks of whatever style this is. Nonetheless I'll try to be objective. Mix wise, it's a lil' lower in overall level than a couple of the others so far. Shame, as the mix seems well balanced - nothing jumping out nor getting swamped in busy sections. Bar the vocal, that is - to my ears it's a little far back; sounds like Miss EK is in the next room! Competent arrangement though, keeps my interest levels up.

Track 6

I can't really explain why, but as soon as this tune started it made me think of adverts for cars on TV! Make of that what you will, hehe! Placement of the vocal messes with my head a little. Of course it's all bang on, I just think I listened to the original too many times, so it freaks me out a little. Cool edits, though. Really wanted something to happen before the mini-breakdown @ 2:38, though, something to build on that real simple groove that got going really quickly in the track. Actually, 4 mins in, I still want something else to happen. It's kinda slick, but seems to lack 'warmth', despite that word really not meaning much I don't have a better one just now.

Track 7

Nice strings to start, very melancholy. I love stuff like that. Beats are a little simplistic and a tad dull, but sufficiently snappy. The percussion scuttering around in the stereo field are a welcome addition, though. Nice vox edits, good use of delays and filters. But that drop at 1:27 is not working for me at all. Drum pattern is very disjointed and distracting, sounds like they've lost a little level since the intro too. Bassline doesn't actually have nearly enough weight to it, and positively screams "VST" at me; it's a real thin, plasticy sound that I'm not into at all. The melody is quite strange also. Overall the sound is quite clinical and dry, a more generous helping of FX on things to give more of a sense of space/depth woulda been better, I reckon.

Track 8

Vocal edits are a bit brutal on this one. Some cuts are a little abrupt and ill-placed. Beats sound tight and well EQed. Not overly enamoured with the LFOed rhodes sounding melody, in tone or musicality; it also really suffers from that "VST" sound. Slick bassline, nice groove to it. I absolutely detest the melody that kicks in @ 2:11, though - far too "Fisher-Price" sounding, no character to the sound and a really irritating melody. Nice bass switch @ 2:59, and the riff here is a lot easier on the ears (I like square waves!). Competent arrangement, good attention to detail. Woulda liked some use of the lush chord progression from the original, if only to break up the electric-piano-wobbly-thing a little more. Of all the D&B tracks, this one has the most rounded overall sound, but I really wish there were more to it.


RgonConquering the world, one Byte @ a time
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Posted: 22 Nov 2007, 3:16pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Fuggit, here are mine, then...

What tracks are you giving points to?  Should be 3 points for your fave, 2 point for next fave, 1 point for 3rd place.

Good comments tho Smiley
Stamina MCPosts: 11
Posted: c. 23 Nov 2007, 1:27amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
I'm not giving any points, as I have a tune up there. Conflict of interests.  teef

I've worked out pretty much everybody's entries just from the comments they've left, so others will no doubt be able to do the same - I just figured critique of all the work, including my own, is helpful to all but in no way influential to the outcome.  music
LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: c. 23 Nov 2007, 9:31pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Ok I'm giving:

3 points: track 8
2 : Track 1
1: track 4



AND VOTING IS CLOSED! Sorry I've been slack...

I'll just add them up, give me one sec...
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LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 23 Nov 2007, 9:44pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Ok and the peoples choice winner is...

Rummage (33 votes, track 8 )

followed by:

Stamina (16 votes, track 1)
Roost (7 votes, track 7)
DJ redback (5 votes, track 6)
Turbulence (4 votes, track 2)
Matt Reverie (4 votes also, track 5)
Modemasters (Rgon) (2 votes, track 4)
Someone else...? (1 vote, track 3)


Thanks guys, stay tuned for Elektro kitten's rundown...
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FlukePosts: 703
Posted: 23 Nov 2007, 9:49pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
haha no doubt Rummo. Big up mate!


and I liked Linden's best, funny bout that. Noice mate!
rummagePosts: 6
Posted: 24 Nov 2007, 8:30amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Thanks to everyone for your feedback and votes!!!

Truth be told.....   WE, Q and myself, wrote that track, in its entirety, about two years ago. 
It was sitting around just waiting for a sweet vocal to come along...     thanks EK
Quite amazing how well it slipped in.  Dont you think?    music

Linden,  totally suprised yours didnt get a LOT more votes like it deserved.

bigz up all of the entrants for your hard work.

Peace.

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Posted: 24 Nov 2007, 6:26pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
well done rummage.

u shopuld crack a bottle of red to celebrate
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Posted: 5 Dec 2007, 11:32amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
I will be in the next few days i promise icon_wink
just finished uni today! So i'll set down to look at all the commentary plus give feedback on all tracks entered. Then i'll announce who won it for me Smiley music

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Posted: 11 Dec 2007, 1:35pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
sorry guys i fell off the earth for a few weeks with uni ending, and a good mate of mine dying plus other life stresses icon_confused I'll get writing soon!
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Posted: 11 Dec 2007, 5:07pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Nuff sed...

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nathoPosts: 2,385
Posted: 8 Mar 2008, 3:23pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
 bump

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LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 8 Mar 2008, 5:21pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Tunes were made, people voted, the votes were tabulated and everyone forgot about it.  biggrin


You wanna make a new comp biggrin? Sample pack action this time I reckon! I can't be fucked personally, but I reckon we could about do another one now if people want to (and if someone wants to make up a sample pack).
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AmbassadorDrum & Melody!
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Posted: 8 Mar 2008, 5:34pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
should hit up m7 do a possible 5158 rmx and the winner if m7 likes it will go on the next cd just a idea
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LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 8 Mar 2008, 5:36pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
A fine idea.
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Posted: 8 Mar 2008, 6:25pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
I vote for a M7 snoozing on the couch sample pack. Tru 5158 bizness! boh boh boh
roostR/evolution massive
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Posted: 8 Mar 2008, 8:07pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Im in, comp stirs up motivation that i otherwise have troubel getting.  So want to make another tune, been too long


Sample pack has to be good tho, otherwise the end result will be somewhat limited. 
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Posted: 8 Mar 2008, 9:07pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Sounds good to me. Should actually get me off my ass and making stuff.
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LeezeeThe right honourable
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Posted: 8 Mar 2008, 11:26pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
Well someone message mark and see if he's keen then!

The last one he was involved in was great.
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Posted: 9 Mar 2008, 12:31amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
im catching up with him tomorrow i get it sorted for yas
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khemAdministrator
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Posted: 9 Mar 2008, 3:52amSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
if he cant sort something out lemme know and ill put together a sample pack.
asylumPosts: 447
Posted: 17 Mar 2008, 2:30pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
nice..im keen


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asylumPosts: 447
Posted: 17 Mar 2008, 3:22pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
you bet! Got my new Macbook pro locked n loaded with Logic 8. Bring this shit on!


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amanoturntablist
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Posted: 17 Mar 2008, 3:25pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
id b keen to put somethin together aswell
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timbohPosts: 2,786
Posted: 17 Mar 2008, 4:41pmSubject: Re: VOTE NOW!!! AM Production Comp.
i will also give this a run. how long will we have to get something finished?